Amazing shu hal steve!!! However, 3 effects I didnt like and I highly recommend you remove them la2ano they dont fit at all.
The strange fade out effect at these times:
0.28-0.29
0.41-0.42
1.09-1.10
Other than that its great and yes develop it. It is your base synth work on it go up along the lines then drop and give empty space for people to wonder what the heck is going then BOOOOM again return to your base synth. This is just a suggestion you can discard if you dont like
