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Postby Shy--Ism » Wed Nov 09, 2005 11:19 pm

I did this design and i thought about sharing it with you, so what do you think about it ?
Here is a link to take a look , it isn't that good but i appreciate your opinion and help :)

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FCL3EX6K
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Postby Proof » Wed Nov 09, 2005 11:33 pm

why is it on megaupload? Anyway, i uploaded the image

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Postby Proof » Wed Nov 09, 2005 11:38 pm

Honestly, i think its wierd....which is the cool part. Took me a while to understand where those lines where headed. I like the "i" ... nice 8) . Could use more work...a lot more, concerning colors and so on. Keep it up...
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- Rodrigo Mateo - Carbon Monoxide (Praveen Achary Remix) [Baires Records]
- Alter Breed - Blue White (Praveen Achary Remix) [Spherax Recordings]
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- Praveen Achary - Pull My Legato [MakTub Music]
- Praveen Achary - Crossover (Incl remixes by Fiord, Manuel Sofia (MOS) & Tanseer) [MakTub Music]
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Postby TrancApex » Wed Nov 09, 2005 11:46 pm

hey sis u r genius , i love you !! well good work , i encourage you , keep on improving sis , i know u have a lot to give
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well yeah Proof u r right , i liked the "i" too , bass zeghoh 3youneh ana w 3am bettalla3 bel lines
anyway nice creativity , and i dont think that it needs work on colors cuz i think it looks quite nice like this , simple .
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Postby hani » Wed Nov 09, 2005 11:48 pm

well it s not bad at all ,nice one
however, why dt u add some effects in the backgrounf instead of leaving it white?
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Postby DIONYSOS » Wed Nov 09, 2005 11:52 pm

Not bad, could use a bit of clarification though... what is your intention behind it?
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Postby DJ_TRACID » Thu Nov 10, 2005 7:50 pm

bass zeghoh 3youneh ana w 3am bettalla3 bel lines

nice work Shy--Ism hehe yeah tranceapex ur right abt that
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Postby Tala » Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:00 pm

could be better!! use your creativity that you already have
(quoted TranApex :P)
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Postby bxtreme » Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:03 pm

haha its nice... MS Paint is beyond good for time killing!
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Postby samer » Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:10 pm

honestly, i dont like it...












.. I LOVE IT!! :D

reminds me of the old pc graphics back in the days of C64!
would love to see more of ur talent sarah :)
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Postby gogui_004 » Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:23 pm

pas mall !!!
ca manque de couleurs mais c est pas mal !
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Postby mixata » Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:40 pm

Not Bad At All, I Like It :)
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Postby ~Tr@N(E_L@TiON~ » Thu Nov 10, 2005 9:14 pm

heheh its cool
and as everyone said abt the "i" I like too :)
w abt the background U can put some effects
keep it up girl ;)
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Postby Shy--Ism » Thu Nov 10, 2005 9:46 pm

1st:thank you proof for uploading the pic again cuz i did have problem in upl it
2nd: since the design is not that simple which is my point/style of creating such funky and *complicated* designs , so i thought i should leave the backround more then simple , just forget about the effects :) , concetrate on the idea of this design and it's creativity :wink:
anyway everyone i appreciate your help to improve my talent in creating such designs!!
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Postby Dreamboy » Thu Nov 10, 2005 10:51 pm

i guess i would look nice on t-shirts ;)
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